Legendary DLC Giant Warthog

Discussion in 'Halo 3 Aesthetic Maps' started by GeneticSpartan, Mar 19, 2009.

  1. GeneticSpartan

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    This is a giant warthog I built on Avalanche.

    - The hog turret constantly shoots out a fusion coil.
    - A machine gun turret inside the hog turret is used to rapidly explode the fusion coil to create explosions at the end of the hog turret's barrel.
    - A teleporter is located inside the front right hog wheel to get onto the hog.
    - The warthog is not drivable.

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    I can't reach the gas pedal...

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    Enjoy!

    -GeneticSpartan
     
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  2. Asthetik

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    Very Original... I like how you set up the turret... try adding more detail.
     
  3. noklu

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    I like the way you've done this, but this should really be posted in the Aesthetic map section. To improve it you can colour code the boxes. It will take long, it will be annoying, but it looks much better. It is in Forging 101 if you're interested.

    Edit: Brilliant, it's in Aesthetic now. :)
     
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  4. GeneticSpartan

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    I already know how to save the boxes to a certain color, but didn't figure it out on my own till I had 1/3 of the hog finished. So, I left it rainbow.
     
  5. noklu

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    Oh, ok. Maybe a version 2?
     
  6. Shad0w Viper

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    *Moved to Aesthetic Maps*
     
  7. Huntar

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    thats actually pretty cool,
    Quick suggestion.
    Change the wheels to watchtowers.
    They look more like wheels. lol
    But other than that it looks very clean!
    looks as if you put effort into this.

    4/5
     
  8. mastersync23

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    Uh...it looks good. A bit blocky, but good. A good attempt at a warthog, though. It could be smoothed a little, but it is a good job. 7/10. Good job!
     
  9. GeneticSpartan

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    The watchtower bases were too big.
     
  10. xbrinkx

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    I would've made the Warthog bigger to fit in the Watchtower Bases, but hey, pretty neat looking map anyway! My question: What is it played best with? Or is it just a structure to look at?
     
  11. GeneticSpartan

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    It's pretty much eye candy.
     
  12. killbot a61

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    wow dude thats the most original idea ive ever seen

    wahts next a giant scorpion on sandbox
    that would ****ing sweet
     
  13. jakob hunter

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    i think it looks pretty good i love the turret and the how you did the windshield but it looks like it has no tires and the turre is a little low. but i still love the idea (me and my friend made a tank once but it didnt turn out to good:)and think you exacuted it really well good job 4/5
     
  14. STWOW

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    Lol
    well this is pretty original but, the forging isn't very neat or well done. Good idea and keep trying :)
     
  15. Kryticate

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    [​IMG]

    • Try making the windshield bigger, maybe by adding another shield door.
    • The end of the turrent is curved, not straight. Maybe use items to make small curves?
    • The front is also curved, but you made it straight.
    • The back should be longer, there is no where to put your feet.
    Here's a good picture of a warthog to help you out.

    Still, good effort. 3.8/5
     
  16. oDannyKellyo

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    Nice attempt Try adding more detail next time 4/5
     

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