Pssh, this thread won't die. As for the thing, get rid of that border and text. Start over on them. Lower the brightness too.
i'll get right on that, the brightness is just this damn old screen on my parents pc... my macbook broke
i was trying to get it darker without it looking like there was a shade of black laying over it.. i may get the v3 out tonight, may not, i gots homework
No offense or anything, but that's pretty horrible. It's like a perfect example of what not to do in a signature.
^^that has to be the most unhelpful comment ever. I think it looks better than the first one. still a little bright though.
Ok list time: -Never ever blur your render. Not even motion blur -Its over contrasted -Good job putting your C4Ds on screen, but erase the bad parts with a soft brush -Border should be 1px black -Text should be smaller and no black outline. -You need a more concrete background. Something that looks real. Thats my style anyways. That should be about all.
bg is completely real, borders suck, and I don't know why it came out so contrasted. And I didn't touch blue for anything.