I don't like the border or the text. Also, the differing contrast (left/right) isn't great. Never put your focal in the middle. Never. It kills the compo.
I hate the text and I debated on the border whether to put one or not.... The different contrasting turned out funky after I uploaded it. It looked pretty sick in GIMP though...
Alright... I want just sharpened the whole thing because it started looking LQ... I'll play around with the focal and see how it is