Forgehubs Top 5 Plays Week 1

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  1. drak

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    no faith, have we?
    You shall see sweeny, you shall see.

    I'll be getting my friend to do announcer, he's beastly at it :p
     
  2. Smeagle

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    Way to lose the last bit of respect I had for you sdrak. First of all, his voice is not nearly as bad as yours. Even if his voice was a little high (which it isn't) It is not a big problem at all. And to say his voice is "un-motivating" Is a stupid thing to say. Who the **** is he trying to motivate? Dumbass.


    Anyways, the video was okay, but I did find some things wrong with it.
    ~You say "friggin" way too much. Not to say it as an insult, it just sort of lowered the quality of the video a bit. Try to differ the adjectives a bit. lol

    ~Try to finish talking about the clip before moving onto the next one. It gets a bit confusing and cluttered.

    ~Give some different angles of snipes to help with the above problem, it will lengthen the video, and make it seem more professional.

    Still, great video and great idea! I'd recommend you ask Sweeney to do the work on this, he has great editing skills, and he would really want to help.
     
  3. xSharpshooter94

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    the last one was a gamevee vid so i couldn't and yeah im trying it was my first time with a vid like this.
     
  4. Tex

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    Sweeny, I love you.

    That was pretty much what needed to be said.

    Sharp, if you don't listen to him, then let me say this. You're a ****ing moron. Whether or not sdrak is going to help, you need to take his advice, and work with it.

    The only other thing I can offer as advice, is when speaking (if you plan on speaking again) be confident. You seemed very nervous which, even if scripted, your voice could lack confidence, and make the video awkward, like we have seen just here.

    Good effort, but also, why, if you don't mind me asking, did you completely, and I mean almost 100% rip this idea off of Anoj's top ten series?
     
  5. drak

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    I meant his voice was "high" as in pothead high...lol

    lol....yet again. Imagine a monotone voice for MLG highlights. Who the **** would watch that?

    kthnxbai
    g2g 12 hour trip nao
     
  6. Furry

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    You think your videos are better?

    lulullululululululullululululullulululul

    Who cares anyways seriously though. Are you jealous or are you pmsing or what? Calm down seriously. Say something nice or don't say anything at all. I thought you were actually a decent person to be cool with. Your reputation is through the roof and figured you have to be somewhat nice to get that much but from what I've seen on the forums and heard on XBL...You really seem like a ****. I can't go into one branch of the forum without seeing you being a total ****.

    Onto the video!

    I like the idea but I think you really need some animations or an introduction rather than just a picture and you rambling on for a minute. The plays were fantastic but your commentary lacked. You voice is fine, although you should play around with some voice generator kind of things to make you sound like Madden himself. I agree with others when you say friggin' alot. Diversify your vocabulary. I'm not the on to say this either, I say friggin' alot too but you don't see me making videos do you?
     
  7. Knight Kninja

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    very professional, very awesome, very good... i would like to enter this coming week
     
  8. Stoj

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    I was gonna say you say 'fricking' way too much, but it seems like eleventy people already have.

    It's cool, but it's needs something different than the others to be unique.

    Blatantly copying is, well...blatant.

    You need something to keep people watching. Don't be so monotonous, get the audience into your vid.

    Apart from that, take Sweeny's advice. like rly. Please don't say 'I can do what I want, it's my video' - that's probably the dumbest thing I've heard. I don't need to explain...

    All I have to say.
     
  9. Nobody Worthy

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    This. Sweeny basically covered everything I would have said. Take his advice. Use it. Stick to it. This'll become winly. kthxbai.
     
  10. Matty

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    Just use Microsoft Steve. He is pro.

    Or get someone with an interesting voice. Not saying yours isn't, but you sound like every other American i have met, except Bnasty and Insane.
     
  11. Huntar

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    nice picks, but try to make your voice less high pitch, try to make it a little deeper, and dont say freakin all the time :p
    (No harm intended)


    is there a thread to submit videos?
     
  12. Knight Kninja

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    it says in the OP of his main thread about this (its stickied) to pm him his videos
     
  13. Y35 <3

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    Yeah you need to learn how to talk before you make a video clip like this.
    Also i dont think insanes should be in there, its just sucking up to him, all he did was get hit by a hammer.

    The video was pretty good, one other thing you may want to do is move the name tags, you said zerosun had a killing frenzy but all we saw was a big white box over the medals
     
  14. Nobody Worthy

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    Sharp doesn't sound like me though. D=

    --You should get Matty to do the voice! (please don't kill me Matty) :D
     
  15. hangman3745

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    Yeah I kind of agree, insanes wasn't that great.
     
  16. Shanon

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    O yay Im 2nd!
    Expect more clips from me Sharp. And great job with the whole contest and what not.
     
  17. XDAO SoX

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    Way to steal my idea....
    But vids should be voted by more than 2 people, announcing sucked. and you need a better video choice
     
  18. X5

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    Uhm, I think he got the picture that this needs improvement, all this is just repetition.
    And I don't know much, but if anything, he stole Anoj's idea. Which really isn't quite stealing an idea, plenty of people attempt stuff like this.
     
  19. Resix

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    idk if he stole the idea its a lot like it but this is strictly for forgehub members so imo he did not steal this idea.
     
  20. XDAO SoX

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    Well thats what my idea was. Forgehubs own top 10 for the month, but Im still glad someone else decided to make one. Just to see how it would turn out
     

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