Dull; Chapter One (Cover)

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  1. Mysterious D

    Mysterious D Ancient
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    Ohai.

    Wtf title you might ask? As I've told a few peoples, I've been trying to start up a comic for some time now, and up until recently all I've had to my name concerning it were a few loose ideas rummaging through my head. I finally forced myself to write down a storyline, I made a few characters (some are still in the works), but I'll get it finished eventually.

    Anywho, this is the cover picture for the comic's start:

    Original (GIMP) Sketch:
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    Finished Cover Picture:
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    Ignoring the obvious slightly "girly" traits (*ahem*... the girl), I was really only concentrating on making this look cute more than I was concentrating on this looking good. There are a few noticable changes from the two versions, like the expression and such, and they were sort of last minute - but hey, it looks nice now. I don't own any expensive programs other than my tablet, so the comics and the like will be few and far between, sorry. I'll be submitting some from time to time, though, so don't think I'll abandon this here page 'o mine.

    You can check my album labeled "Dull" for updates and the like, if you wish. I also have a DeviantArt page for those of you who care to check it.

    All for now, more to come later, etc.

    Domi
     
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  2. Stoj

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    I have to say, that's way better than what I can do, though his legs look a little skimpy for the trousers his wearing.

    Great job.
     
  3. Juggernaut

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    Not picking on you are anything, but that dude has some huge ass shoes. Lol. Anyways, it looks great. If I could actually freehand something that isn't crap, I would, but I suck at drawing people, and well, drawing in general.

    Also, um... the colors of the scarf... I just don't like them. Good idea though making them match the pants.
     
  4. Shade117 pro

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    dude u should make a tiny manga series cause i think ur up to the challenge

    but it would be really hard & that was a suggestion but anyways nice book cover
     
  5. Mysterious D

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    Baggy pants, Sir. I dunno, this is just the way I've drawn them for as long as I can remember, I thought I'd keep them.
    Huge ass shoes are called boots. Lul.

    I don't really like the colors of the scarf either - I had originally made the gray parts the same color as the dudes hair, but then the scarf blended in too well with the hair and it was a bit tough to distinguish between the two.
    More criticism is appreciated.
     

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