Colors are way too dodgy. Try using a gradient map on B&W. And then set it to darken at like 25%. That may fix the problem. Everything else looks tight though.
I think there is too much contrast between the colors and i ****ing hate clowns. I hate clowns so much that no matter what you did to this sig, short of removing the clown, i would still hate it.
Clipping masks maybe? Add some. It looks smexeh...but for once, there's not enough going on. The redness is too much. Lower the opac on that gradient map, and it might work...