pipeline

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I looked at the pictures and I'm guessing this is a 1v1 map based on its size? I like how you interlocked the double boxes on the ground level without flipping them upside down first, that's something not commonly used. The only thing I question on this map are the spawns. It looks like you would get spawn killed a lot because the map is so small. Also, the walls on the top of the picture of "base 1" look a little sloppy so you might want to fix that.

EDIT: If you don't know how to already, click the link in my signature for a tutorial on embedding pictures because Forgehub standards require you to embed your pictures. And your download links don't work for me. Nobody else post about the pictures except for Sin who already posted!

EDIT 2: Ok, now there are more pictures. That underground pipe looks really cool, especially how you didn't just have a squarish shape, but how you added more walls to make it an octagon, which looks more like a pipe. The water makes it look like a sewer and now it looks like it could support 1v1, 2v2, or 3v3 games because there is more to the map than just the top area. Again, great map and I am downloading now.

 

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I think the best part of the map is the pipelines. It is very well interlocked.
However the walls could use a fixer upper.

 

I'm not sure about the rest of the map, I just love the pipe! It looks amazing. I can't wait to play =) DL'ed.

You might want to flip the boxes for better aesthetics, but it looks pretty good as is!

 

alrigh, about the only good thing about this map is the tunnel
dont have the shield doors at half hight, just crouch and you cant get sot unless ht other person crouches
you need to flip thos boxes and interlok them
ther are also to many weapons/ nades for such a small map
delete some spikers, the sniper and flares,
also this looks like spawn camp heaven
and on a final note NO TURRETS ON TEENIE MAP LIKE THIS-lol

 

very interesting tactic for the double boxes not being flipped. i actually really like it for some reason. and the map does look a little small for 10 people to b scurrying around in it. if u test it (sorry if u did with 10 people) ud see that 10 is a lot

 

Very nice job on the map. Looks like you worked real hard on the map with the interlocking and everything looks very smooth. I like what you did in the "pipes" area of the map.

From what I can see from the map with the "small close in feeling" of it and since the map is made for 4-10 players looks like that could call for a very enjoyable multiplayer experience. This map looks very fun for capture the flag/multi-flag.

Nice job on the interlocking along with the map, and I'll be sure to test out the map when I can, but until further notice looks very fun and well made.

 

everything is clean everything is nice, though the map is kinda small and two turrets in such a small map and centered, I don't know if that is great gameplay there, btw it's my birthday, yay (lol).

 

This looks like a well playing 1v1 or 2v2 map. the first and second floor designs were made up by the tunnle below. its a very nice design. im not sure about the gameplay because of the shotgun in the small tunnle, that could cause camping but there are multiple entrances so it shouldnt be much of a problem. the overall map dsign is pretty original, and mostly when i say that i mean a map made with parts of other maps. but its very good eathir way. can you tell me how to make a tunnle properly? like a step by step thing? that would be nice. 4.5/5

 

Yes, it may take some time, but you definitly need to flip the floor boxes. I studyd this well and you could still make the 'pipe' with the boxes upside down. I also believe that this is too small for 10 players, you may have put spawns behind cover but it is still way too easy to camp by spawns for kills. You turrets are overkill for this map and it looks pretty small for a sniper. I like the idea you were going for but this map falls a little short for me. Dont hate me for this critisizm cuz it just helps for future maps. good luck with the rest and keep forging.

 

it looks very fun there is sutiable cover and is very neat. it kinda small but it matters not. interlocking looks good and very neat

 

i like the tunnels and how perfectly merged they are. i think that whoever gets on the turrets is just gonna kill everyone and a sniper in this tiny tiny map... not such a good choice.

 

Looks noob. Jkin lolz. Anyway I like the map. The turret area looks cool and you did an absolutely amazing job on the pipeline! Some of the stuff looks crooked an sloppy though, like the base 1 pic.

 

Okay so ur map looks decent but to small for my taste and your gunna need to flip those doulbles but other than that its a 4/5

 

overall the map looks pretty good, got some pro's and con's that can easily be repaired.

Pros-
Most of the map is pretty cleanly interlocked and steadily made. i must say that inside the pipe itseld was awesome, with the shield doors acting as probably dirty pipe water, clever ideas.

Cons-
the floor could have been made out of the cleaner looing side of the box, to give the player a more 'clean' feeling while playing on your map, also the side walls could have been interlocked.

My Overall Rating- 4/5 for creativity and one hella-awesome pipe :]