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Discussion in 'Off Topic' started by Mikey, Aug 28, 2008.

  1. Mikey

    Mikey Guest

    May I have some comments and critique from yall please?

    This is not my best, I know.
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  2. Smeagle

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    I do like how you made it seem like the top black border is one of those censor bars to hide an identity. Very original. But the rest, such as text and BG is quite plain.
     
  3. aMoeba

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    Looks okay to me, is the black bar on her face a censor? Also, there seems to not be a flow in it (I might not know what im talking about)
     
  4. Mikey

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    I agree with you on the BG being plain, but I think the text is fine.

    Any suggestions?

    That is a different kind of signature, called a flow signature.
     
  5. Smeagle

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    Well, you could use a C4D or something behind her to make it a flow signature. Or you could sharpen the BG a bit to make it look a little more textured.
     
  6. Mikey

    Mikey Guest

    Meh I do not work well with C4D's

    I do not know how to modify them well, or to make them blend in well with the BG and render. I also cannot find any good ones around the net.
     
  7. Smeagle

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    Maybe you could use a very soft brush to erase her outline. Then shell blend a little. But I dont think thats what you were going for.
     
  8. KB

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    I like it... I like it alot... Great job!
     
  9. Lord Terrax XII

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    Ur render is hotter than .Core's. His Scares me. Anyway I think that some swirly brushes would make the BG better. Also I don't like the censor bar. I think you should just cut the eyes out since the censor bar ruins the pop out effect. Other than that it's a good sig!
     

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