Voi Outskirts

this is a nice first map, but have you ever heard of interlocking? i am not being sarcastic, but look on forging 101. other then that, the gameplay seems nice. the other concern is sloppiness. make a V2 and make it interlocked and neat

 

this thread is not up to forgehub standards. unfortunetly, i don't have the link that tells you what to do. but i'm sure someone behind me will. but to embed pics. save them from bungie.net. then go to imageshack.us and upload them. then find the direct link at the bottom of the page. now, back in the thread, click on the button that looks like a mountain. delete whats auto matically in there, and paste the direct link.

done

 

http://www.forgehub.com/forum/halo-forge-maps/18644-embed-screenshots-your-map-thread.html

Here you go please go here and follow instructions

 

Yes It does look like a great Map

Pros: Could be great with team slayer
Cons: Needs interlocking
Needs more cover

The map looks good, make a v2 with corrections

Check out Shock Theta's Map Posting Template

 

Sorry mate, but this isn't exactly up to Forgehub standards. A bit more of a description would be great, a few embedded pictures and all that jazz.

However, for a map that uses almost no glitches, this looks very neat and well done. Good job.

 

from the pics on b.net, this map has a great design. if it was interlocked, it would look better and flow better. It isn't required though I'll DL and be back with review

 

looks nice for a first map but the only thing is that there is no interlocking but who am i kidding. i never used to interlock so yah like killnon2 said try forge 101 its actually very informative. pictures yah, you know i wont say it. i use photoshack because its simpler, but thats me. good luck on your forging

ill put great, as a first map but well expect more from you in the future. 3 stars

oh yah one last thing fix it in 24 hours or itll be locked, this happened to me on my first map. its not too hard.

 

I think that great maps dont need to use interlocking, my friend makes awsome maps that have no advanced techniques in them. Alot of people on ForgeHub are like that, even to beginners. All maps dont need to use some glitch that a guy figured and put it to good use.

The map is great, its solid, and clean. Team slayer would be great!

 

hmm it looks pretty plain =[ and u shud deffinately learn how to post pics u make a photobucket account save pics on bungie.net to desktop then upload on photobucket and take the img code and paste it on ur forum

 

I think this is a really great start. I was really terrible (still am) at making maps. By the looks of the photos, all of the items, objects, what have you not, are all in a really great order. They seem to be in perfect place. But you will have the interlocking police at your door tonight probably. YOU MUST INTERLOCK. Haha. No, but, keep it up, try and do better. You've already surpassed me.

 

.make a second version and use interlocking.

 

looks pretty good for a first map. Just clean the interlocking up and then your map will be up to date and looking good. Keep Forging and Welcome to Forgehub!

 

this seems like a good first map, interlocking, which you mgith have never seen ebfore, would make this a ton better, maybe add some other aspects to jump to, and aesthenics to your map.

 

looks good but you need interlocking and maybe where the double boxes with the grav lifts try and make ladders theres a video on youtube

 

Great job for first map! You don't have to interlock because it looks fine without it but if you want it to look superb that's what your gonna want to do... The map looks somewhat blank though... Try adding more cover/structures

 

its i little to plane and is there any weapons on the map i do not get the concept of this map at all 2/5 you did not work very hard at all on this

 

I agree, It could use some interlocking. The layout is nice and all, but because of the sloppiness, I present to you a 3/5