UNSC Valkyrie Background: When a small rebellion begins on a small colony turns into a total war the UNSC send the UNSC Valkyrie as part of a relief force trying to end the war in one fast troop drop. The attackers must capture the landing sites and anti air batteries swiftly as their capture will be a vital move in this war. Info: This map works pretty well on most game variants, I haven't made a specific variant for it yet but I am working on something. This is best on territories however is also good on slayer. There are plenty of guns and other pieces of equipment at your disposal, however I got slightly sloppy in some areas with my weapon placement which you may want to tidy up a bit. This is my first big project so I haven't got any interlocking and some places may not be as good as they could be, feel free to edit anything which you need to and tell me what I could improve on as it would be a great help. P.S Sorry about the lack of action shots but I haven't taken many good ones yet. Screen shots: Anti-Air cannon Attackers Base Defenders Base/Anti-Air Battery The ship Download here: Bungie.net : Community : Forum Topic Listing : Forum Reply Listing
Doesn't really look like a competetive map, and it's rather wonky, I would adivse not saving and quitting
There you go. Looks interesting, although its a bit messy. It seems to cater more towards the casual/aesthetic grouping though. Also, i would consider deleting your last thread where you ended up putting nothing an leaving it blank. That could fall under the double posted map category and therefore have this thread become locked.
ahh much better nice work kinda looks a little sloppy but since its in the air ill give you a break nice map
nice map nice map but in the wrong spot it should be in the athsetic maps.... but still looks like a half good ship 3.5/5
I think that some parts of this is cool (like the ship), but some parts i have to say really aren't (like the anti-air cannon), i'm sorry I just have to say that it looks nothing like an anti-air cannon, (constructive criticsms).
too many figgin skybases. Though i guess their worth downloading as they can be amusing and it takes forever to make on yourself. I like the ones where the ship actually has an inside that you can play in rather than a floating platform to shoot at. I quess its hard on standoff and im complaining too much. so good job any way. I'll admire the work you put in
I don't think you'll get many downloads if you say that it's up to us to tidy up where you got sloppy... Just take the time to fix it up a bit
Looks really messy, if you want to merge in the sky you may want to practice on a few maps before you release one
whats a good way to merge things in the sky? Ive tried and its pretty hard to do it well. Usually I place the same item that isnt going to respawn on top of it so when I merge it with a new item i know about where it is. -also, how do you get the picture below your text to show your rank/kills/medals?
I work on it more. As all the others it's messy but I like the idea of a anti air cannon. Fondry lovers: Blue prints help a mapmaker. Foundry Designer
there you go. you fixed it from the last post. good job the floating base is quite nice! that air cannon is weird though, does it really shoot?
1. what's with people stealing "Valkyrie" as a name? 2. That's aesthetic, not competitive 3. looks pretty cool, though.
The ship itself looks pretty sloppy. Were you attempting to make the warthogs immobile? If so, use an immobile object behind them. I look forward to a cleaner v2.