maps ive made: intrinium, solemn, erode, mantis battle, octagonz

Discussion in 'WIP - Works In Progress' started by stealthylemon, Jan 8, 2013.

  1. stealthylemon

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    A few maps i made and finally got the time to make a proper video so figured I would share.

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    i cant get my youtube videos to embed help?
     
  2. Fenix Hulk

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    Your video stops @ 1:30 for me.
     
  3. stealthylemon

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    hugh i don't know? I'm pretty sure its not my video it plays back for me and it did for other people earlier so not sure sorry :/.
     
  4. Fenix Hulk

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    It's working for me now, I kept reloading the page earlier and nothing. Don't know what the issue was.
     
  5. stealthylemon

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    cool thanks for watching
     
  6. darkprince909

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    I liked intrinium and mantis battle out of these. The others seemed a little meh to me. I've personally never cared for octagons, so that one's not really one I can comment on. Solemn seemed okay, but it looks like there's a major lack of cover. I haven't played it, I'm just going off the video. Erode also seemed okay, but I think if you did something similar to that, but didn't restrict yourself to just rocks, it would turn out much better. The "trees" look odd too, so I personally would change them.

    Intrinium looks like it has a pretty solid layout, enough cover, and everything. What I might suggest, though, is some sort of visual indicators for the trait zones.

    Mantis Battle looks sick. I couldn't really see anything I didn't like in the vid. What I would love to see, though, is a version that was set up for BTB
     
  7. reaper3bot0

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    keep forging my advice would be to try making a more structured map.

    heres a structured layout sketchup I found of a real old map for quake
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    Feel free to use it. The spots with 4-6 lines are stairs or ramps in this case but im sure you can invent something. The arrows could be jump pads.

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    btw your video isnt embedded because you chose youtube.be instead of youtube.com link from your video manager screen you know where it list all your videos.
     
    #7 reaper3bot0, Jan 9, 2013
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  8. stealthylemon

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    Ok thanks for the help on the video embedding and ill look into that sketch.

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    glad you liked intrinium. As afr as making visual ques go though for the trait zones I maxed out the budget so i would have to rework it alot and still tell people about it, its something that bothered me too. Im really surprised actually that you like mantis battle i could make a BTB variant try using most of what i already have made see what happens could be the same thing just everyone has a jet pack lol. Might come back to erode and make a "real version of it seeing as how the layout isnt half bad. I haven't gotten to play test solemn which i think could be alot better with play testing since its set up for dominion but i have no clue how it plays. Kinda annoying since i spent the most time on that map making those weird bases and all. Thanks for the feedback i want to make a BTB map next but well see i tried making somthing yesterday and meh. anyways thanks for the feedback ill have another map up tomorrow.

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    What do you mean by more structured map? Do you mean like more modular? or are you referring to erode because yeah that doesn't have much structure lol.

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    Thanks for the feed back everyone more maps will be coming soon.
     
    #8 stealthylemon, Jan 10, 2013
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