Need some feedback for this typography t-shirt design that I worked on last night. It'll be converted over in the end as white text but for now it'll be black. edit: Noticed the colors of the "evil" text and whats around it. So don't worry about commenting on that.
I'd wear that, for sure. It's got humor AND morals. If you're looking for things to add, I'd say a tiny bit of background color to go along with the areas. Like yellow/red gradation behind the flames and possibly a green gradation of some sort behing "money" and so on.
Thanks! I wanted to keep the colors down to a few only so that screening them would be easier for the group to do. However i'll try it out anyway and see what it looks like.
Not feeling the fonts for "is the root" and "of all," they seem to be out of place with rest of the image. "Is the root" should have the same amount of space between "Money" and "of all." "Money is the root of all" needs to have the same distance of space that "lack" and "-of-" share.
I think you can guess but I ran out of room and just tried to work with the space I had as i didn't want it to be to long on the shirt. However as it's now been pointed out i'll make another version too for the correct spacing.
Its actually very impressive. Inspiring, this little piece. And apart from the technicalities that Miraj pointed out its very nice If I had to say anything, I think the many varying text sizes makes it almost chaotic to look at. If you could make the "is the root" the same size as the "of" above it that make help create some consistency. But really, it's very nice.