Serene

Discussion in 'WIP - Works In Progress' started by Robert Jonez, Jul 3, 2012.

  1. Robert Jonez

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    Hello fellow forgers! I have completed the basic design of my new map, Serene (Name not finalized) Now, I wanted to make a 4v4/5v5 map that had vehicles in it. Though none of the pictures show any vehicles, there are 2 ghosts, and 4 mongoose.

    Here's the weapon list-

    -6 DMR's
    -4 Needle Rifles
    -2 Needlers
    -2 Plasma Repeaters
    -2 Snipers
    -2 Grenade Launchers
    -1 Plasma Launcher
    -2 Plasma Turrets
    -4 Health Packs

    All have adjusted clips and respawn times, of course

    Well, enough talk (I think?) And have a look at my map!

    Pictures-

    Blue base Side view (Same with Red)
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    Blue Base front view (Same with Red)
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    Blue Base Interior (Same with Red)
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    Health pack station in Blue Base (Same with Red)
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    Neutral Base (2 of them, not sure if I want to keep it though...)
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    Overview of the map
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    Please provide feedback! Thanks!
     
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  3. Robert Jonez

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    Thanks for your input! I got a little insparation from Battle Creek with the 2 base thing.

    And I never had the privelage to plat Halo CE CE. But it looks fun!
     
  4. Eightball

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    Nice to see you still forging, Robert. I do feel that the map could use more structure for players to move around on, but it's hard to get a feel just from looking at the pics. Otherwise, it looks great.

    Also, keep the map name. It's purty.
     
  5. Robert Jonez

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    I was going to quit... but it's like a drug, man.

    Also thanks for the feedback. I'm going to add more structure around the map, then I'll go from there
     
  6. Audienceofone

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    This looks fun, but I would love to see these walls come down. They are big and out of place in a natural terrain setting I think. If you can replace them with visual guides and an ending soft safe zone that would be much nicer. Also, you need neutral bases and a central structure, so dont delete any of that. I cant say much about what you have though, as the screenshots make it difficult to tell. Invite me to forge with you some time and I'll take a look, so far from what I can tell I'm liking how this is shaping up. too bad we wont have any TCOJ lobbies to test this.
     
  7. Robert Jonez

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    Thanks for your input! You have a point with the colliseum walls, and it would work nicely with what I'm planning to do. And sure Ill invite you, If you can handle me talking the whole time ;)
     

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