Have you see the music video for the original? The Shoes - Time To Dance (Official Video) - YouTube Its got good ol' How To Pronounce Jake Gyllenhaal - YouTube in it
Spoiler Minus The Bear - Ice Monster - YouTube Thrice - Blur - YouTube Goodbye, Titan - Monument - YouTube
I want his voice. Bitches (and I) love Anthony Green. Circa Survive - Imaginary Enemy (SoundCloud Sessions) - YouTube Oh, and this is for I PAINTS I: Minus The Bear - Pachuca Sunrise (MySpace Transmissions) - YouTube
I love BBNG. But yeah I just made this so please go listen to it. Screammm!!! by CKD on SoundCloud - Create, record and share your sounds for free
I feel like your drums/percussion needs more depth. In addition, I think you need to clean up frequencies with some EQ'ing. Don't be afraid to heavily compress drums either (excluding cymbals), it seems quite popular in Dubstep and Electro House. I know it's a bit more chill than that but a little punch doesn't hurt. In regards to EQ'ing, cut deep around 100Hz on all of your synths so that your kick can shine through. In addition, cut around 200-500 Hz (depending on if you want a loose or tight snare, etc). I'm not a huge fan of the flanger and reverb but that might just be a personal gripe. 2:20 was my favorite part -- if it were repeated it would be very similar to Kill the Noise. I should probably post some music since this isn't a CnC thread but oh well. I figured you would want some feedback. I guess if you wanna discuss this further, PM/VM me.