simple sig

Your choice:

Constructive and overly complimenting,
Or harsh but ultimately more conducive to getting better?

 

I really don't like it, and I'm usually one for action shot freeze-frames + text. lol

 

I can't quite tell, but off-hand the lens-flare, I guess it would be called, is a bit too strong.

 

Lighting:

The lighting is wayyyyy over done, and too "In yo face". It's also wrong. See the lighting on the meat/fork? It's coming from the other side.


Negative Space:

It's not really effective in this, and way over done. Negative face doesn't have to be "Blank white expanse", just unused space to ironically make a point. It doesn't really fit here.

C4D:

That's a really blocky and awkwardly used fractal. It doesn't really flow with the signature.