Clarity of Faith

Discussion in 'Halo and Forge Discussion' started by oOMr BecksOo, Nov 18, 2010.

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What do you think of the map!?

  1. Its ok i've seen better?

    4.5%
  2. Pretty good look good?

    9.1%
  3. One of the best covenant frigates ive seen?!

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  4. OMFG my eyes have exploded!?

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  5. Best Convenant Frigate Ever!

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  1. oOMr BecksOo

    oOMr BecksOo Forerunner
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    Clarity of Faith ( Covenant Assualt Carrier )

    PLEASE LEAVE FEEDBACK OR SUGGESTIONS!



    Hi all
    Firstly i would like to thank you for taking the time to look at this thread!​

    Right, this is going to be my second offical map! it is the 'Clarity of Faith'
    a covenant assualt carrier!​

    I know i only have a few pictures at the moment but they show my progress in which my map and how it is coming along!​

    The real idea of my post is not only to get some general intrest but to get feedback
    i am aware that you are unable to physically see the map but
    screen shots i have show enough!​

    I am looking for some feedback in which i can take into consideration and think about
    before finalising it. it is currently about 70% complete but i am rapidly
    finishing it progress daily, i have actually remodelled it multiple times changing shape
    and its overall outlook. ​

    I am also hoping to produce one of the best and biggest convenant ships
    on the site, and yes it should be playable! thus far it has taken almost 40 hours!
    so please leave feedback about what you see and think? and also if possiable
    compare it to others you have seen! Thanks for reading and i hope you
    enjoy what you see.!​

    This is the first stage and was my starting point! has been changed
    several times! to give a more defined shape a cleaner forging!
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    This starts to show you the overall shape and yet again i have redesigned this several tims!
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    This picture shows the most complete side! and its current looks! as you can see
    there is a huge change in shape and if you can see look at the engines and
    the curves! I know this is a key factor!
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    Heres some more pictures for you guys!
    This picture shows the inside of the neck of the ship see the different levels!
    And my personal favorite the middle glass walkway!​

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    This picture shows more detail on the back of the ship and my most favoured part of all
    because it has such nice curves! now you can see the engines and back hangar a little better!​

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    This picture shows the main hangar of the ship or the central location! and the back hangars lead into the ship look at the shear size of it!​

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    And lastbut not least a side on view that shows two entrie points one side
    of the hangar and the back of the bridge. just to show a little more detail about
    the ships entrances and a peak inside!​

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    Please dont comment about it not being finished as im working on it but
    keeping you guys informed and showing progress and improvements
    i hope you enjoy the new photos and i hope it clears a little more up
    about what it looks like inside!​



    PLEASE LEAVE FEEDBACK OR SUGGESTIONS!
     
    #1 oOMr BecksOo, Nov 18, 2010
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  2. MONSTERheart

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    Wow. This looks a lot better than some of the other Covie ships I've seen around here.
     
  3. oOMr BecksOo

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    Thanks for the comment!
     
  4. Oo iRoNy oO

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    Well I have never forged a frigate before, so I can't give you constructive criticism. But I can leave a positive comment, and tell you that this could possible be the best one I have seen yet. I don't really down "frigate" maps, but I would definitely download this when this comes out.
     
  5. Chuck the Bean

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    very nice so far! cant wait to see the inside of it! good work!
     
  6. oOMr BecksOo

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    Thanks again guys just got online so im doing some more now! inside looks pretty cool it is a very large space and the outside isn't finished yet! will update with more pics asap! thanks again
     
  7. Sgt Surchin

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    this is THE most cleanly forged and accurate Covenant ship i have EVER seen so far. personally i am very curious to know how well the gameplay of which you speak turns out. in terms of aesthetics i would have to give this map a 9/10 simply because the detail of the ship seems a little "blocky" but i guess that can't be fixed. by the way, this map makes me horny.
     
  8. cluckinho

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    Looks pretty awesome. The last pic makes this look really cool. Very nice job on capturing the fluidity of a covie ship
     
  9. oOMr BecksOo

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    Thanks for the feed back yeah i know what you mean sea urchin i am thinking of ways to make it less blocky but for the time being its the best i can think of.
    the front and neck are my main concern to this blocky ness as well as the back wings, but until i finish then i will consider alteratives, and as for gameplay im hoping to encorprate some sort of invasion into this but my main objective is to complete the outer shell. i have been told that this is going to be impossiable because of it shear size to complete but i am optermistic and will continue to try and make it work thanks for the awsome feedback!

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    Heres a quick update for you guys! this Project will be delayed due to a drastic remodelling at the bridge! This remodel does the shape so much more justice personally it makes it look a lot less blocky but 10x more complicated! I am also looking at proportion! at it feels and looks more smoothly than before and makes it look more connected from end to end!

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    Quick update for you all i have been working on things to intractive with on the map i wont say what exactly but they should defiently add to the feel and play of the ship!
     
    #9 oOMr BecksOo, Nov 22, 2010
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  10. physcopirahna6

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    Dude When is this going to be posted it looks amazing and I wanna see it now ;) Can't wait for it :D
     
  11. Overdoziz

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    You have to make it compatible with race. Seriously.
     
  12. AnthraXe187

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    Ok, first off I do have to say this is, by far, the best Coveneant cruiser I have ever seen EVAR! Everything is so smooth, and the curves are exocuted perfectly. I do have one quick question though. It does look like it takes a lot of objects/budget, how many/much objects/budget do you have left? (Hopefully that question makes sense.) And I cannot wait for the release, after seeing it I almost exploded with envy.
     
  13. Spicy Forges

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    One of the poll options should be eye-gasm... seriously! This is amazing!!
     
  14. Rsvi Etzudee

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    Best covenant ship iv'e seen. Not as edgy as other ones, the blocks flow perfectly into eachother.
     
  15. I Black I Eye I

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    Cool ship, can't tell you much about estimated gameplay or sth because i don't know what you're gonna do out of it.
    will the ship be acessable everywhere or just a small part?
    I think it's cool to make a map out of it, maybe with several rooms, or lifts somewhere to get an cool map or at least a bit =D
    if it's big enough, invasion would be cool.
    I think I saw a map on FH where there was a ship and in phase 2 or so a lift spawned which leads you up to the inner of the ship :p
    that would be awesome gameplay ;)
     
  16. oOMr BecksOo

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    Hi Guys I've been real busy lately only really just started to forge again I've had a few issues with this map especially with the shape! these photo's are well outdated and loads has been done to the ship but sadly not nearly enough for a release date, Im also still trying to figure out wether to re-release Savannah V.2, things I can tell you guys are the game modes i'm hoping to add into this:

    ~Race! this will be done i am hoping with banshess.
    ~Invasion this will be a new take on the game mode I Hope.
    ~Smaller Team Based game modes such as KOTH, CTF, TDM etc but im wondering if I may confuse myself!

    And to answer your question anthraxe187 at the ships current shape it has taken around 5500 budget but this expensive has allowed me to gain a much sleeker line I have worked out my budget and pieces I wish to use, I am also trying to figure out if I can add a UNSC base nothing major just for the looks and a little gameplay.

    But now I am back and thanks so much for all of your comments has helped to inspire me to get on with it and finish the job!

    Regards
    ~Becks!
     
  17. Charles Stoot

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    this looks like a race map more than a covenant cursor, sorry but that's what I think. Though the interior design looks great.
     
  18. UnfrozenLynx

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    May I ask what you were doing so far back in the Forge Discussion forum? This is quite the necro-bump.
     
  19. oOMr BecksOo

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    I went offline for ages back now though I suppose the idea wasn't as popular as I hoped but back on here now and ready to start a new.
     
  20. timmypanic

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    Way back I looked into this map as I researched if anyone else had made c.a.s
    I am sorry to here you lost your map as I was always interested to see how our versions would turn out and compare against. I like that this version had some nice curves but seeing the amount of objects needed to make the top section, you would be at a struggle to maintain accuracy on the lower section. Hope you continue your work on this ship
     

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