Nothing is true...

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  1. iTz Longshot

    iTz Longshot Ancient
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    Old
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    #1 iTz Longshot, Nov 14, 2011
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  2. Monolith

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    Could we see a stock? I'm not sure what you did
     
  3. iTz Longshot

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    Yeah, put it in. Not a whole lot. Sharpen and blurred the images some. Added blood, a small light by Altiar, and gradient maps.
     
  4. AceOfSpades

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    Again, I don't care for the text placement. Also, the light and the guy above Altair's left shoulder are a little distracting.

    It's not a great stock to work with tbh.
     
  5. Confused Flamingo

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    The color of the blood is a little too dynamic.

    I almost feel as though my eye is being forced towards it.
     
  6. Elite Warrior5

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    Don't blurr the guy he killed. I had to look closely to see if he had killed somebody that was in the pic.
     
  7. Monolith

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    The stock was blurred, he can't unblur a section of a stock image. You can sharpen, but it wouldn't nearly do the effect desired.
     
  8. pyro

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    The blood seems way too bright for the rest of the image and I don't think the text fits well with the image. The stock was good enough that a bit of cropping probably could have made a fine sig out of it.
     
  9. iTz Longshot

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    Thanks guys for the comments. I darken the blood and moved and removed the text. I pretty much suck with text placement lol If I should do anything else to make it better, just say so. Thanks :)
     
  10. pyro

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    I don't know how you would go about doing this, but it would be cool to brighten the light of that windo behind him so it whites out some of the second figure in the background and silhouettes the main figure. I'm still not a fan of the text, partially because the phrase feels shallow but also because what you've done just doesn't seem to fit.
     
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  11. Elite Warrior5

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    I like the 3rd one.

    But how about a phrase like "Many will fall"
     
    #11 Elite Warrior5, Nov 16, 2011
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