Halo 3 Hayabusa spartan

Discussion in 'Reach Aesthetic Maps' started by ericdragon19, Sep 8, 2011.

  1. ericdragon19

    ericdragon19 Forerunner

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    my first time making a human as i was inspired by xsogx grim. [​IMG][​IMG][​IMG][​IMG][​IMG][​IMG]g[/IMG][​IMG][​IMG][​IMG]
     
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  2. PacMonster1

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    Well done. If this is your first statue than even more impressive. The human form is very hard to get right proportionaly and it looks like you nailed it.

    If I were to be a bit nitpicky, the finer details look a bit...off. The shoulders and upper arm armor doesn't seem as prenounced as it should be and the area under the chin doesn't seem right.

    But still very impressive work in the spirit of grim.
     
  3. Crysis1110

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    well as your first time I have to admit IMPRESSIVVE I love your pistol and the helmet looks AWESOME!I see that your furthere maps will turn out beatiful
     
  4. Xtermin8R645

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    I like it! The rocks look kinda out of place with the whole spartan being the forerunner material, but it looks pretty realistic and the sword is a nice touch. Also liked the visor.
     
  5. Minister Muffin

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    I am too impressed and agree with Pacmonster. If I were to be precise as to what you did right and what you did wrong, I'd say you can definitely tell it's a hayabusa spartan, but I feel that the details on the helmet and shoulders are off a little. Don't get me wrong, though. I think this is really good.
     
  6. serumembryo

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    This is very impressive for your first statue. In fact, I cant even make a better statue after 2 or 3 tries! It looks good and all but the body movement just looks a bit awkward. I'm not sure why. I feel that placing a katana in his hand isnt the best idea, I liked it better on his back. Isn't the shoulders and chest plate supposed look a bit more bulky? That was the chest piece was known for.
     
  7. Grenade

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    That actually looks really good. Nice work on the helmet in particular, and I love the magnum and sword. Nice job, especially since I remember seeing your older statues way back, this is a huge improvement...
     
  8. IAMDOOMDEMONIC

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    Keep up the good work i like your style you should message me and i can show you my maps sometime.
     

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