Lure sig

Discussion in 'Off Topic' started by Monolith, Aug 25, 2011.

  1. Monolith

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    New sig. I didn't edit a whole lot, mostly combined pics and added subtle effects

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    #1 Monolith, Aug 25, 2011
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  2. Noxiw

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    Not a fan of the blur on the arms. You need to tier your blurs more, being that the eye is in focus, it would make it much more appealing if the arms closest to the tier in which the eye rests were less blurred and they became more blurred the further away they were.

    Not really a fan of the text either... maybe it's the placement, or the fact that the colour of blue you chose doesn't match the eye itself? Overall, it's not terrible, but could be much better if you cleaned it up a bit.
     
  3. Poetic

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    Very good, but you blurred the arms too much and it needs more depth.

    It doesn't seem liek the arms are flowing towards the eyeball, just one on top of the other.

    It is reallyt good though.
     
  4. Monolith

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    Updated OP. Tried to add depth and changed the text color. Thanks for the comments/critique
     
  5. Noxiw

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    Much better, but now there is a split focal. =\
     
  6. Monolith

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    FUUUU lol. I could blur the hand a tiny bit, but i am feeling rather lazy atm. This may or may not get done :p
     

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