Subject 7 episode 1

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  1. Zow Jr

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    The first episode of Subject 7 is here. I know I was going to release it on the 14th but I had some complications. Enjoy and please tell me what you think!


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  2. Audienceofone

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    The elites were just hilarious from their noises, and the camera angles were shaky at times, and the spartans were moving their head all over the place, which didnt look the greatest, but it wasnt bad. You did a good job taking on the challenge of a halo machinima that is a serious tale, and not just another RvB inspired comedy. I think improvements can be made, but this has potential.
     
  3. Zow Jr

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    Maybe I should hire a professional cameraman, cuz my hands are naturally a tad shaky. And I will improve the voice acting as much as possible. Thanks for the constructive criticism.
     
  4. Audienceofone

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    Your welcome! I do think you have a good thing going with this, and if you have a planned script, not just making it up as you go, the story might become something quite worthwhile. Good luck with the future films!
     

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