Sooo, I made this machinima a while back and decides to post it on my new Youtube channel as my first video. YouTube - "Remember Me" - A Halo Reach Machinima Would be great with some feedback or something since my channel is completely new (lost my old one due to hackers :/ ) Anyways, check the video out if you wanna, otherwise just ignore this post See ya
Nice! Really good but there is a lot more you could put in. First of all you could have put in a commentary in the back saying for example, war is harsh, friends and family die.. etc. Then you could have put in when he reaches the place with the blue ODST, rather than them dying they like leave and head back and continue another mission or something. Just my opinion.
Since I'm Swedish I really wanted to stay away from voice acting in this video. I mean I'm good at English and all but my accent would probably screw it up. Also I had to cut the last scene short since I wanted the video to fit nicely with the music... Thanks for enjoying it though [br][/br]Edited by merge: Thanks for the feedback
well i suppose if you were with a group of people say like noble team for example jun has a different accent and its fine. oh i saw this other post about somebody asking for people to do a machinima and i was interested and so was this other guy was aswell so that makes 3 and then if you joined aswell it would make 4 and i know a few other people who might do it too so i was hoping it would start a machinima. i have a great storyline and everything i would love if i had people to do it with
Do you mean the thread about Dark Corners Productions? Sure, I can probably help out with some machinimas as long as the production is taken seriously. But I'm also dedicated to making my own thing so if we could like "exchange" help or something that would be great. I don't know how serious this guy is. I have already got a channel on Youtube up which I've made myself and I don't really wanna give that up...
Wow. That was really nice. Nice emotional effect, and I think the lack of voice acting actually added. Although I think the ODST and the main character should have a similar color scheme, to fit their enlistment, and the position of the body at the end was a little awkward, I thought it was fantastic. Great work.
yes exactly that thread, ya i would take it pretty seriously ive always been interested in machinimas. i think that exchange help thing will work fine and i understand you not wanting to give up your new channel
Thanks for the feedback I know the ending is kinda awkward, but I needed a fast way to end the video. I'm not completely satisfied with that part... [br][/br]Edited by merge: Thanks, okay. Maybe you guys can do some sort of machinima/short clip so I can see what you've got? You saw my machinima so at least you know how my videos looks like (I also have an HD PVR by the way). Seeing some sort of film or hearing your voices would be nice
yes well none of them have actually replyed yet so its not like totally organised or whatever, i have an entire story planned in my head all i need is people to do it and someone to film it because i have no camera or anything
How about sending me a private message about the story so I can take a look at it? Don't worry, I won't steal it or anything x)
Wow, pretty good. My only problem is the end. It's a bit too abrupt and it took me a while to realize he had died. Otherwise, great work!
Thanks. I know the ending is kinda sudden but I had to fit it with the music somehow... But thanks for liking it!