UNSC WarStorm

Discussion in 'Reach Aesthetic Maps' started by D4ni3l G, Sep 27, 2010.

  1. D4ni3l G

    D4ni3l G Ancient
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    UNSC Warstorm
    The Naval Support and Intelligence Processing ship by D4ni3l g

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    Hi there. This is my first reach map iv'e uploaded to forgehub so I hope you guys like it. The United Nations Space Command Warstorm is a heavy support ship used by the office of naval intelligence (ONI) to gather and store vital war intelligence, and took me around seven hours to build from start to finish. The ship features a hangar, vehicle depot, bridge, and stairs that lead to the naval office block at the back of the ship.

    The main role of the ship is to store, analyse and process intelligence and research in the science labs located at the rear of the ship. This has several advantages for ONI, primarily that this important asset of the UNSC is hard for the covenant to locate and neutralise due to it always being on the move. Warstorm can also move from site to site, so if reasearch is being conducted somewhere, it can be extracted and sent up to Warstorm waiting overhead for analysis and immediate extraction, cutting out the risk of interception by Covenant forces.

    ONI recognises level of risk that this ship is given due to the nature of its duty, and in true ONI style, the ship utillises vast amounts of UNSC resources to protect their precious cargo. The ship has several UH-114 Falcon aircraft and M12 Missile Warhogs for both protection and transport of ONI "spooks" (agents) carrying out research operations on the ground.

    So without further ado, here's some pictures:

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    Interior

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    Hope you like it. Please give it a download and let me know what you think, what you like, and what I could improve. Thanks! ​

    -Danny​
     
    #1 D4ni3l G, Sep 27, 2010
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  2. HaC x LEGE7VDZ

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    jesus all these amazing giant ships are completely hammering mine amazing nice one ill be downloading this

    EDIT: erm maybe if you can add a barracks then the ship would be Perfect
     
    #2 HaC x LEGE7VDZ, Sep 27, 2010
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  3. halodudeguyman

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    HOLY CARP this is a good ship. It stacks up to the other large ships out there(Talking to you, barc0de. :D).
    I give this a 5/5.
     
  4. Posiedon Sniper

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    It has covie weapons!!!!!!!!!! ahhhhhhh!!!!!! (frustrated) :mad:
     
  5. bob4010

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    dang... nice map man

    its oni what do you expect (damn Bastards)
     
  6. xSoGx Grim

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    One of my favorite features of this map is the observation deck. I like what you did with the windows and your choice of angles.
    This ship has a unique look and design. It does not have a bold and aggressive design to it, but rather a casual and aesthetic. Think of a luxury cruise liner rather than a navy destroyer. Yet this is a fine addition to our Forgehub fleet. We can have our victory drinks on it after we take over the other sites! -didn't say that-..
     
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  7. Marshman119

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    wow. this is cool man. I don't know what you could improve on!
     
  8. elitebiker18

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    Very well made. I took a closer look at the map in forge and I can see you put your time into this. It kind of looks like a very long version of a snow speeder from star wars.
     
  9. PhantomStrike

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    Awesome map I like this ship a lot and I've seen a lot of other good ones too. Anyhow, the ship hangar is too open if this ship was for real this is not something I would go into space using its too open and has too many windows. In space windows are more likely to share to space debris but even if its the future that hangar makes me nervous. Try adding some large shield doors or one way shields or shrink the height of the roof of the hangar. This is an awesome map and just a request, I got a similar ship that I've been attempting for the last several months but all tests have ended in failures any tips on design? Good work...

    This ship shall be our watchman for generations to come as we continue our quest for world domination... -something like what Bungie would say! :)
     
  10. HEROEZ BLADE117

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    Nice map dude. I love the features and detail you put in this. I just wish people would stop making spaceships. Its starting to get old. Yeah they are cool but there has to be other stuff to make. Good job.
     
  11. SilentJacket

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    I'm gonna be a downer and say that the walkway_larges on the edges of the ship look very out of place, perhaps make it bigger, or remove entirely, it just doesn't match the bulk of the rest of the ship.
     

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