Lagoon

Discussion in 'Reach Competitive Maps' started by JordanHoffy, Jan 17, 2011.

  1. JordanHoffy

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    LAGOON


    WEAPONS
    DMR x 2
    Energy Sword x 1
    Plasma Repeater x 1
    Rocket Launcher x 1
    Gravity Hammer x 1
    Grenade (Normal) x 4
    Grenade (Plasma) x 4
    Shotgun x 1
    Sniper Rifle x 1
    Magnum x 1
    Plasma Pistol x 1
    Needler x 1
    Spiker x 1
    Grenade Launcher x 1
    Needle Rifle x 1
    Concussion Rifle x 1
    Mounted Machine Gun x 1

    MISC
    Health Stations x 4
    Teleports x 2
    Man Canons x 2
    Gravity Lifts x 2
    Explosives x 5

    Thank you all for taking a look, this is my first map, and I hope you all enjoy it! Let me know if you have any criticisms, suggestions or complements.

    ENJOY!

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    #1 JordanHoffy, Jan 17, 2011
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  2. Equin0x

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    you might wnat to add a weapons list, more (specific) pictures, and some gameplay shots. I cant really get a feel of the map, and that doesnt really make me want to download it.
     
  3. JordanHoffy

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    Thanks for the advice! This is my first map.
     
  4. PinkishObject

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    looks good almost feels like blackout/lockout also for the map try to make the rocks blend together a bit better and don't use the same type facing the same way (don't know about your budget) other than that good job
     
  5. Arctic Hunter

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    This map looks good, but could be better. From what I can see from the pictures this map looks very spread out. Many ways for disaster to happen. I see that you may have to jump a but around this map and thatll take your focus off the game. Connect your structures together with a bridge or other such items. This map for me would be a 6.5/10 purly because of space flaws and gameplay issues. Not saying it is a bad map at all just giving some advice. Remember a map may look good but hows the gameplay?
     

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