You clearly have both artistic talent, and access to lsd. Lol. It's a very cool picture, in an abstract way, and I really can't think of much criticism. The only thing I can say, is that the shadows are backwards, but hell, it's an abstract piece.
Yeah, it's always difficult to critique abstract art, which also can make it difficult to create truly good abstract art. It's either good, or it's not. But I try, thanks for the comment. >.>