A quick and dirty layout of an invasion map I made yesterday. The map takes place on the "Montana" part of Forge World. Phase one starts off with the attackers (spartans) fighting off the covenant and activating a bridge in order to get to "Falcon Base". The attackers get a turned over warthog plus a few supplies, The defenders get a ghost, banshee, and a decent arsenal. If the attackers activate the bridge, Phase 2 adds more vehicular combat, and the objective to assault blue base, crack open the bottom, and steal the power core. With the detonation of the bomb, the doors to "Falcon Base" open, attackers can then use the falcon to support the flag carrier on their mission back to base. Well that's the summary of how it works, I haven't tried it out yet. I'd be grateful for any impressions on whether this looks fun or not, I'm never really sure of my own maps. Mostly because I don't plan anything at all, and just "wing it". Oh, and if you want to take a better look at it, here.
From what I can see from the pictures that you provided, it doesn't look too bad. It would be nice if you could provide more expansive images of the map, since these are rather focused on specific points and are pretty small. Even one overview image would be helpful.
That long, downward bridge looks as if it will become old and irritating rather quickly. Is there any alternative to using it?
Haha, yeah it might be difficult to make your way up the bridge with the bomb. Though you don't have to spawn down there, so you could spawn near the top of the bridge and defend the bomb carrier on his way up. Or I could make Phase 1 a teleporter and scrap the entire bridge. Let me know what you think sounds better, also mention any other snags you think might ruin gameflow. It won't upset me to find out it's broken. If the map happens to be good enough to share with the community then great, if not, that's fine too. I make maps just because it's fun to make them, I'm sure I'll accidently make a quality map at some point.