Poe, had some ****ed up eyes, but I'm not sure they were that bad. :/ The eye to the right looks unfinished.
Yes. When I started that blasted eye kept bothering me and so I kept trying to fix it ( OCD problem lol ).
Besides that one eye it's a really good drawing, a bit simple, but still good. I'd think about adding in shadows and such. >.> <.< And fix that eye
Charcole sticks? What size is this image on paper? You need to get a thinner stick for the smaller areas, and do some planing on proportions before you start. The eyes are key as it's key in defining character, so you should get them more aligned.