Remake Hematoma V2

Discussion in 'Reach Competitive Maps' started by nillapuddin626, Oct 12, 2010.

  1. General LiWar

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    It appears as though your download link is dead. Can you update it? This looks like a good remake
     
  2. nillapuddin626

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    Just did, I apologize you caught me inbetween putting it on in my fileshare
     
  3. JP591

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    this map is pretty awesome
    I really like how much it resembles Coagulation
    Definitely the best remake Ive played so far

    if you ever want to play it add me
    this would be great in customs
     
  4. DUDERMAN

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    Great improvements to the map. It looks great. Now onto some suggestions...

    -The rocks on the side are a tremendous improvement over what they were but I still can't help but feel that ramp should be further extended so it's not so steep an incline.
    -The teleporters should probably be lowered slightly into the ground
    -The hole on top of the bases are the right size now but I feel they could be more centered.
    -The ramps on the side of the base could be a bit thicker to match the opening to the top.

    Now onto the base itself. The entire thing looks great now. However, I do believe it may be too high. Again, the lower level looks incredible but it may be too high up. This is merely a suggestion as I have not looked at the map to the extent I'm sure you have.

    Also, if you have the time and resources. You could block of the open area behind blue base and to the side of red's ridge with colosseum wall pieces. If you do, you should make an incline on the top of the area behind blue base to simulate the area you could snipe from in halo 2 (you could fly up there with a banshee).

    All that being said, these are likely nitpicking items as you have done a great job perfecting this map. Congrats on your hard work and thanks for the great remake.
     
  5. nillapuddin626

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    First off, Thanks for your feedback and givin my map a second look

    ill run by your suggestions see what i can do
    *the bases unfortunately have to be that height or the banshee wont be able to fly out without it getting clipped on the sides or top
    *im not crazy about the angle of the ramps either but theres not much else i can do without messing up the dimensions to much :/
    *there is a niche for the banshee that is already there its in the pics :)
    *im out of natural pieces so no more rocks
    *but i might try and see if i have any wall pieces for additional boxing off

    but thanks alot man, ill give them a look and hopefully i can conjure up a perfect remake over time

     
  6. ZackofJax

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    All of my XBL friends have been dying for me to make a Coag remake, but I never got around to it. Awesome job! 9/10.
     
  7. nillapuddin626

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    Again I appreciate the continued feedback
    Im glad you enjoyed it and just so anyone reading this knows Hematoma is set to be tore up by the Testers Guild this weekend so an even better Version 3 may be in the future

    Thanks for everything to everyone who downloaded my map
    I hope its been fun, its been amazing as a creator to have so much positive feedback

    I know it will might suck to have to purge Hematomav2.1 after 2 weeks of it being finalized and possibly download another version come next week but I hope you all keep track with me and hopefully Hematoma will be as perfect as forge allows in my next update
     
  8. WWWilliam

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    If you where trying to make a exact remake if that last picture is that part where you can fly up to that little rock thing :p its in the wrong spot its meant to be in front of the base and (not sure if right side but idk) and you should make it drivable up there like in halo 2 you could drive up that slant in the wall to get up there.

    Just a suggestion if you where trying to remake it perfectly.
     
  9. wbs Skatanic

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    Dear sir, I am writing to inform you that since Reach came out, I have been consistently unimpressed with their Blood Gulch remake. I hereby declare this Coagulation remake to be damn near perfect, and its inclusion in the official matchmaking playlist would be thoroughly deserved, and wanted.
    P.s. I have to play this with a Scorpion on it, just to bring back the memories.
    Very well done.

    Yours sincerely,
    Skatz.
     
  10. nillapuddin626

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    Well if you notice the "bottom" or "floor" of the Carney hole was already there, I just added the vertical outcropping to create the same effect as Halo 2.
    So... Even if you were correct in its location (which your right its not perfectly set in place) where it is, is the best place I could put it

    but Thanks for the feedback

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    Thank you very much Skatz, Im glad you love it so much
    (pending Testers Guild feedback it might get even better so watch out for a new version)
     
    #30 nillapuddin626, Oct 26, 2010
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  11. Kittenpaste Company

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    I will definintely be testing this today. Halo 2 had the only version of Blood Gulch I truly enjoyed - this looks to be a very faithful remake. I'm just hoping you have some well placed soft kill zones (to act as the old invisible walls).
     
  12. LETHAL BLOW

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    This totally beat Hemmor(something). I loved Halo 2's Blood Gulch remake and I am extremly glad to see someone make this. 5/5 Stars! Great job!
     
  13. wi1lywonka

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    Fix'd

    You can love me or hate me.
     
  14. wheelman

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    love the game great remake
     
  15. Combs53090

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    I played this a few days ago and wow. I know we're supposed to post constructive criticism but I really can't find any flaws with this map. There's a reason why you got so many downloads. It works really well. I think this should replace Hemorrhage in matchmaking.
     
  16. Th3Endl3ss

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    Great job man! I will DL.
     
  17. nillapuddin626

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    Everything is upto Halo 2 standards

    ... thanks I appreciate it?

    Awesome combs Im glad you love it, I really spent just endless hours making it and also thanks for playin it the other night we had a pretty kickass time

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    .. again

    .. umm thank you
     
    #37 nillapuddin626, Oct 31, 2010
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  18. The avid Forger

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    I really think this map is amazing and yes, i only works for a few gametypes witch is my only issue and i think if you spent a little more time this could become featured.

    And as such I think this map could work for all gametypes (not including Invasion) even including invasion slayer.
     
  19. Ice Pinata

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    It's a nice map. The bases look amazingly replicated from the originals in Halo 2, and I love the whole bunker feel of them, like they're half in a rock outcropping.


    Too bad my maps ain't this good.
     
  20. nillapuddin626

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    New version of the map, Hematoma Returns!
     

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