....Turtle and the rabbit anyone? You probably need to be a little more creative. Just adding sexual jokes into an old folk tale isn't creativity.
thank you for the constructive criticism and yeah the "Tortoise and the hare" it was supposed to be a playoff of that.
Eh, it kind-of ran on for a little bit too long. Also, no offense to the people that acted them, but the voices were a tad annoying and off-putting. I know you were trying to for the stereotypical fast talking rabit and slow moving "elephant", but, eh, it was just not working. The humor was OK, at times. Nothing I haven't heard before, and although it was supposed to be somewhat non-original, you could of added a bit more "extra story" into it while still keeping it shorter.