This is a map i did for the forgetacular contest. It consists of two sides separated by a tunnel. One side is on the beach, the other is in a small valley. Very fun to play team slayer on, works for team KOTH also. This map makes a lot of use of the scenery already there. Don't try to leave the beach to go to the island, or you will run into mines.
sorry, but you need pictures i dont know the exact forum that tells you how but its in here somewhere
How to post screenshots. I have a question just from the description. Why do you have mines on the island? If you have enough budget, you could've built a physical barrier. And if not, a kill boundary would work just fine.
Working on getting pictures, the mines are for pure comical effect. If you make it past the mines to the island you are killed by a kill barrier.
I looked at the map, and now I see that you do have kill boundaries. However, I still think that a physical barrier made out of rocks would be much more appealing. My main suggestion would be to add more. There's virtually no added structure to this map, aside from a couple of rocks. You have $7000 left. Use it. Make some interesting buildings on the beach. Put a cool base in the valley, more than just a turret and some sandbags. In a nutshell, the map is boring. There's nothing on it that makes me want to play it. Try to change that.