Gard-Out V1 (Help Needed)

Gaurd-Out? As in the old H3 map idea to fuse Gaurdian and Lockout?

This looks sweet. The small rocky area doen't seem to have a quick way back to the map though. A man-cannon or teleporter would be nice.

Looking forward to release!

 

Its kind of bland. There is nothing wow about it. Its just a decent walkwayed map to be honest.
It doesn't suck but its not that great.

 

You mean my idea hahaha actually seriously i am doing my idea form halo 3 but i like the looks of this, as Atik said the green area seems a little out of place but other than that i like it, idk about the railed walkways though cause i like the more open walkways than the bridge walkways.

Perhaps adding some larger areas along the walkways kinda like how Cage has it set up near Health spawn just a little something more to give it more dimension

 

Why is it gard-out instead of guard-out?
Go ahead and post this in the competitive section, it looks good.

 

Sorry, I just skipped the text because it was colored.

Place spawnpoints with the back towards a safe place wall/edge of map, and facing wherever the player would want to go (usually towards the center of the map on something like this). Place at least 40 spawnpoints, since the worst thing is spawning in the same place often; the more the merrier.

Start points should go on opposite sides of the map, labeled red and blue for different teams. Eight for each team should be plenty. On a map this size and not meant for ctf/assault, spawn areas should be unnecessary.