A lot of things happened since I finished this. It's been through so much problems. And black is a ***** to use. For some reason, the black colored pencil smears, sticks, and is almost impossible to get rid of, because it's sticks onto your other colored pencils, and then when you draw with those, black spreads along with it. So I was cleaning every colored pencil I used before even thinking about using it. I'm still going to do signatures for awhile. Have artist's block, so I can't think of anything to draw. Don't full view. You'll see... THE DAMAGE.
I like the lighting and how it darkens around the curves of their hair/body etc. Maybe its just the style but it annoys me how i can see the left ones eye even though it is covered up by hair.
Yeah, I was copying a style, and that's what that certain style does. It's anime, whatcha gonna do? Anywho, quit covering up the criticism. I can take what you've got to throw out.
Really thats all I've got. I am not crazy about anime to begin with, so I'm not the best critic for this kind of stuff, but i love to draw and i can respect a good drawing when I see it.
You have gave the horrible title. But It seem to be neither horrible nor the terrible. I hope that You will have to improve in the expression of the character. So It would be look like so warrior and also horrible. I hope that You will make some change in this art as well as far.
It doesn't looks like horrible at all but two girls in the drawing looks cute enough why you would like to give horrible name to them. The thing you need to improve is to try to give some expression in the image.