WARZONE Hey guys, I'm back with another racetrack post. This time its a themed track. The theme is war. The idea came from HEROEZ BLADE117. This track is placed right in the center of a battle field. I would have to say it took me about a day to make and I think its pretty good, for this kind of idea. I made sure I put enough detail into the map to make it look like you are actually in a battle field. I think you guys will like it. PICTURES OVERVIEW: THE STARTING LINE: As you can see I made the starting line to look like a bunker. TURN 1: TURN 2: TURN 3: Turn 4: THE FINISH LINE: So thats basically it.... I think adding the bunkers was a good idea. Again I would like to thank HEROEZ BLADE117 for the idea. If any of you have an idea for a track than respond to my forum: Sandbox racetrack ideas. I hope you guys like the map. Download Here: Bungie.net : Halo 3 File Details
You have done an alright job on the scenery, but the track is boring and nothing really making it apeal to me, that doesn't mean your tracks bad but you need to add something that will get people's attention. Add a few jumps or look at some of the other race tracks you will get a few ideas of them. As for your rails they are a bit messy merg them together to make them look better. All you really have to do is making it look better and adding in something like a jump or something. I may download and have a closer look.
Looks okay but try not to keep tracks flat, they look dull and are usually boring to race. Next time try adding some more colour, making your track longer and a better design and layout to keep the racer interested.
It definitely looks like a warzone, but it seems pretty boring. On your next track, try making some banked turns. Like Tay said, flat tracks are usually dull and boring.
did anyone even take notice that I said in the description that I made this map for someone else or dont you guys know how to read.
Yes. But you posted it here, and by postin it you ask for Constructive Critisism. And that's what you're getting. If you're angry about what the above people are saying, then you should never have posted the map. They are simply pointing out that flat race tracks are usually boring, and I agree wiu that statement.
For your next one, i present you with the idea of banked turns, hills, and jumps... but please keep the attention you gave to aesthetics. For any race map this is important, otherwise it becomes dull doing laps. Oh, and something I am dying to see is a track that incorporates a jump off of the giant dune.