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you might want to check out some of the clauses and how they are melded together at parts. Overall, good. I didn't like how you described the plasma twice in the sentence, "No one wants to remember the near perfect memories of plasma burning, the perplexing smell of flesh being burned, the sheer horrific destitute of children being broiled and cooked alive by blue, hateful plasma."