Set the Limit: Rawr rawr rawr

All i did was crop it and add a light source, and IMO, it looks a lot better. You have definitely improved, but you just need to think more about the core elements of it first, the lighting, depth etc. You almost did it here, i just finished it off for you . And don't be afraid to use smaller canvas sizes with bigger images.

Please don't edit someones work without explicit permission, I know your intentions were good, but still =P

-RST


Hmm, i see where you're coming from, but if i hadn't have shown him, how else is he supposed to know how to improve in that way? I think this way was much more effective than just saying "add a lightsource, and crop". But yes, i understand your point :].

-J4M

 

RST, cool yo ballsack son, it's for Learning Purposes. Not like he's using it or claiming it. 'Neway, all it looks like is that you've replaced c4d's with brushes on your normal type of tag, which imo is a step down.

 

RST you ****tard, "if you're going to edit someone's work, make sure you have permission."

Hypocrite. Even if you have the ability, editing someone's post just to say: "Blah blah blah, I'mma correct you" blah blah," then you're abusing powers. YOU CAN EASILY JUST POST A REPLY. And with it being a forum with slack rules, you don't have to worry about breaking the rules.

I know having new mod powers is fun, but they're not a toy.

As for the signature, it could use better smudging. The ground needs to have more cloud like shapes, and be smudged in streaks to add to the speed.

 

v3 v4 are secks.

v2 is icky. Needs moar contrast.

 

Personally I like your version over Jam's, although Jam's is more... correct, in theory.