Radiate

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  1. stouf761

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    Last one of 3...
    As with Atomic and Chemicals, this is another Chem project...

    heres a couple variants... suggestions for improvement are not just wanted but necessary...
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  2. RageQuit

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    #2 NUKE EMBLEM! :DDDD
    I dont know why Im in this section... Im not a Graphics person.. and I have no suggestions xp .. but to me, the first is fine.
     
  3. Red Army

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    Look, I didn't really want to post but I mean if you actually want an honest opinion, here's mine.

    They are ugly. I just don't see what the point of them is either.
    The Nuke emblem seems completely out of place with the rest of the image/s.
    Everything about them looks overdone and seemingly random without anything to bring it together.
    Honestly, I just don't get it.
     
  4. stouf761

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    I'm glad you posted, I wish more people were brutally honest, thats true CnC...

    Its supposed to be basically a radiation symbol, which was given by the stock, and I tried to center the emblem on the point where the three loops met at that bright spot...
    What do you suggest I do?
     
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    The "nuke emblem" does make sense. It is a radio active emblem with an atom. You know? Like nuclear power/weapons? But i have to agree, i dont like them.

    What type of science class is it? Chem?
    If so maybe you could try something with a cartoony crazy scientist as the render?
     
    #5 Roland, May 16, 2010
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    I would go a bit easier on the green lines. They seem a bit too much.
    The bright yellow lines look too much like a childs finger painting. They need to be a little less random in my opinion.

    I think they idea is great, but the current execution isn't that great.
    I think you need to take a fresh look at it, not try and fix this. Work off the same idea, but start again.
     
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    -First one is best.
    -I don't get the middle bit (yellow+red thingy)
    -I would love to look at this while stoned.
     
  8. stouf761

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    Red, what do you suggest I do? Should I keep green in it or make it a warm color only thing?
     
  9. Mischgasm

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    Stouf, what program is this made in?

    The first one is the best imo because it's more crisp and it seems like the saturation is to high one 2 and 3. I would suggest a different color palette though, that green and yellow don't seem to go to well together. Changed my mind.

    Lol...you've never been stoned.


    Edit: First is Glowing lines filter, second is graphic pen or chalk something, 3rd I'm not sure. Try to avoid obvious use of filters. Can we see the original?
     
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  10. stouf761

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    'Shooper Elements 8.

    I was kinda goin for the whole radiation for the green and obviously the symbol was the source of the yellow.
     

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