Persia

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  1. Icecikle

    Icecikle Ancient
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    Comments and critique welcome.
     
    #1 Icecikle, May 15, 2010
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  2. Whisper

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    I'm liking it, but maybe cut off a little bit from the left side.
     
  3. Roland

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    Yea, cut it off like ^^^^ said.
     
  4. RaBBiiTTT

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    Damn, that's a pretty good looking sig right there. The only negative thought I have in mind is that I feel the smudging below the focal may have been just a tad overdone.

    This is your best work in a while. Keep up the pace.
     
  5. Krazy Kumquat

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    It's a nice sig, good colors and flow, but it's just boring. It's just a guy surrounded by incoherent smudges.
     
  6. QKT

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    depth is good until you get closer to the prince.
    lighting isnt gradual so it looks a bit weird imo
     
  7. Icecikle

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    Cut some off, picture in a second.

    Fixed, maybe?

    Isn't that what most sigs are, or at least just a picture with a few effects...Or in your case a scene, just a plain scene, with some text. That doesn't help much, as you can see.

    Could you elaborate on how the depth isn't good so I can fix it? I looked but didn't really spot anything...

    lighting, fixed, maybe?

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  8. RaBBiiTTT

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    Much better. I have no problems with the lighting or depth, personally.
     

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