- Light source looks too artificial - Depth is okay but needs improvement on the right side - Change the text - I personally dislike your focal placement - Needs more blending Don't take this the wrong way; I'm simply giving you some helpful advice for your improvement.
why would i take this the wrong way? I've been on this site for practically a year now and marked the post with "CnC" i understand what criticism is...
so you go and take it the wrong way... front parts of the c4d are overblurred and look a little pixelated because of it, and the lighting is poor, but i see what you've tried to do. i think the light source is in the image which isnt a great thing either, try positioning it down a little
ugh. im glad to accept his criticism. just i have no reason to take it the wrong way. hence why i asplained. ****