So I made this is my Graphic Design class for a package project. I need criticism from more than just a 72-year-old crazy dude (my teacher). I took the picture with my phone but since I'm working on a Mac at school I can't upload a screen print.
More Info: My dumbass teacher says that it's only worth a low B (80-85%) because the font on the front is un-readable.
Where's there's horse ****, there's a pony. Can't have the good without the bad. Actually, I would have to agree with him. I'm sure he means that the text is overdone. Tone it down a bit. I don't want to sound like your teacher, so don't take it to heart.
I've been in a graphic design class all my years at high school and from what I can see, I would agree with your teacher. It needs to be easy to read to most ages, and it seems kinda plain. Think about a box of Warheads and imagine how eye catching that is
Haha, I bye warheads because of their design. Not that big of a sour fan. XD But yes, it's very bland.
text placement needs improvement. text is perfectly readable. there's worse real stuff. i can see where you're teacher is coming from, because it looks like not much work's been done by you.
Is this a UK GCSE graphics course your on? Im on that if you are. Were creating a game with (Cover, inserts, cd design, POS). It's kinda fun and TBH I see why your teacher is giving you a B. It's very fair, you don't look like you have put much effort in. Text could be aligned better and the colours are awefull. Also AWESOME FACEORZ!
The text blends with the background because it needs more contrast. Maybe add a black border around the letters.
For my GCSE in graphics, I'm creating a clothes shop (scale model) along with other things, like T-shirt, mug, but everyone in my class gets to choose what to do. Anyway, I can understand why your teacher said what he did, just use a simple font. Problem solved.