Singlarity

Discussion in 'Halo and Forge Discussion' started by l PATRICK l, Dec 8, 2009.

  1. l PATRICK l

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    Hello there, this is my preview for my map, Singlarity. Singlarity is created on Foundry with many smooth and connected abstract pieces which together, I think, creates a cool layout. So without further wait, here are the pictures.

    *Note: If you have any concerns, please explain how and why the problem needs to be fixed, this will make my finishing of the map a lot easier, again thank-you.*

    Overview 1
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    Overview 2
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    A video will be added at a later date.

    Please leave helpful comments
     
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  2. Dobam

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    Hey please change name because i got a map i made and she nammed Equinox and i was going to put it on map preview so plese could you change it ! ??? !
     
  3. Rorak Kuroda

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    You've definantly got some nice stuff going on here. It might just be me, but I personally don't like all the strange angles, though. It just looks messier when done on foundry.
    So far, the map looks incredibly open, but it's just a preview, so keep working at it.
     
  4. Elliot

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    It looks to rough and it is to open, try and get more levels of play
     
  5. AceOfSpades

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    Flair already made a racetrack named Equinox so I'd advise both of you to not use it.
     
  6. shockwavekp44

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    Im pretty sure a preview means it is not finished yet... I think.

    The map looks great and I love the designs. THe interlocking and merging look great. Seems like it would be a fast moving type of gameplay. Great job so far.
     
  7. l PATRICK l

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    Name is changed
     
  8. Dobam

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    Ahhhhhh ! I need to change it again !
     
  9. l PATRICK l

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    rough? im not sure there is texture to a map, but ok then thanks for that
     
  10. TKS x MoNsTeR x

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    - All the arc structures look very sloppy, like you ghost merged them without lining them up properly.

    - I dislike the accessible Fence Box. Being able to be on both sides of a Fence or Fence box creates an unfair shooting match up. This is because bullets in Halo passing through a fence are extremely inconsistent. You could kill somebody with one shot of a sniper or you could waste a clip without harming them. My point being that the fence box platform will create an abnormal combat environment.

    - From the pictures, the fence walls in the arc structrure look awful.

    - This map is way, way, way, too open on the floor. From what I can see, it's basically blank Foundry with some aesthetic arcs.

    So basically, it looks like you just had fun with ghost merging without any kind of design or ahead of time planning.
     
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  11. l PATRICK l

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    first off, the fence boxes you are talking about are at most 3 feet off the ground, therefore they wouldn't be shooting that lowly. Secondly, it is a preview meaning i'm trying to get ideas for what could make the map less open. and as far as sloppy goes, you will have to explain it in a forge game with me.
     
  12. Solo

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    I hate to further burst your balls, but there have been at least 3 other maps on the forum(s) named Vanquish. I'm just giving you a heads up so you won't be left with an unoriginal name.

    Cute arches, btw. :)
     
  13. l PATRICK l

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    name chang3ed again!
     
  14. Rorak Kuroda

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    Lol. I've already seen a few maps named singularity. One of them was a racetrack here on forgehub I think. Here's a few names from my personal list you can choose from.

    Nitrate
    Hermetic
    Binary
    Pulsar
    Osmos
    Distance
    Velocity
    Pursuit

    I have a massive list of map names, here are a few I'm willing to share. PM me if you want anymore suggestions.
     
  15. l PATRICK l

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    i dont care, im sticking with this one i'll end up changing it later probably
     
  16. CaptnSTFU

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    Has a real good look too it, but i have to agree. I'm sure its just the angles but it looks a little off to me. Lining **** up with ghost merge is hard **** man. Anyway the fence box walkway looks really smexy. As for the openness, maybe some small structures. Adding some second stories would be a nice addition, it'd force players out of open area's and into the aesthetic areas that you want them to play on.
     
  17. Dobam

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    Maybe you can add more covers and all thoose things or just cool stuff !
     
  18. l PATRICK l

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    ok cool, ill try to add a br tower or something, thanks guys
     

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