your images aren't embedded, and nobody post after this, the pictures are just gonna have to be looked at manually like old times, please correctly post next time
The one base that we can see from the pictures looks really cool. I dont know why but the colored columns just look really really cool. Also im guessing that its symmetrical from what we can barely tell from teh pcitures(try and give us pictures of the other base). Also a description would be nice, the weapons on the map is always good to add to your post. This way people feel more informed, so that they want to dl it. It looks WAY to open for a map with aturret. and when i say that i mean WAY to open. Definatley try and throw some more structures in there, or just cover. Srry, dont think im going to dl this because it just looks really boring. Its way to plain. If you added more stuff, i really think this would turn out to be tight. Also maybe you should make it for more gametypes then capture the flag and team slayer. Looks like this might be fun with assualt, king of the hill and maybe even territiories.
Ok, I don't understand where the heck the name "graveyard" came to be for this map other than the fact everyone is going to get killed like mad because it is so open. My opinion, add more crap, it doesn't have to look good... In fact anything extra would pretty much be an improvement to be honest. Sorry bro, better luck next time.
http://www.forgehub.com/forum/competitive-maps/85408-graveyard.html That was your original post. But its not a double. Well, maybe it is because you didnt have the other thread locked. Anyways, I see no major changes to the map and you dont mention if you made any. So Ill stand by my original post. The map is pretty empty making poor lines of sight. I dont want to make you feel bad, but you have to test first or at least check lines of sights in order to make a good, playable map. I also disagree the fact that the map is in the Competitive section. There are tons of equipment and a poor choice of vehicle placement.
The temple thing looks badass but the rest of it is a bit open. I'd suggest adding some more cover. Also, in future posts it would be a good idea to add a weapons list and a little extra info.