loshon's Tut Fail

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  1. R0FLninja

    R0FLninja Ancient
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    i gave up about it being like loshons and did my own thing

    v2 without text line and less yellow
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    keep in mind this is like my 3rd time using a render, not too harsh, CnC?
     
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  2. Conkerkid11

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    I really like how the ODST stands out among the ruined buildings behind him. The text is neat too, I like how you didn't capitalize the text like it's supposed to be, it looks much more neat the way it is. I really have no complaints... Nice job ROFL!
     
  3. R0FLninja

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    yeah, i like the text, i turned down the opacity on it so its sort of grayish/seethru. And i think this is my best render related sig i have done.
     
  4. Pedobear

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    Text is pretty bland.
    I would suggest removing or covering up the crap in the upper right corner of the sig, behind the ODST.
     
  5. R0FLninja

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    what? i dont see any crap.
     
  6. loshon

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    I do. A bunch of pixely stuff. Crop it or move the render. Other than that, the smudging looks like you didn't put a lot of time into it, and the area around the text looks oversharpened/LQ, and there really isn't anything to the sig. Make stuff happen.
     

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